Peer Assessment Feeback of 'Celestial'

Another media class evaluated mine and Ellie's preliminary task and commented on certain aspects of the movie.

What elements of the sequence did you feel were successful?

• The light flashing when the girl was walking down the hall.
• The props that were used were good and effective.
• The lighting was good and the angles were too.
• Good costume.
• Eerie opening, graveyard, black and white.
• Corridor sequence - chilling non-diegetic sounds, edgy visual effects.

Were there any aspects of the sequence which you felt were confusing/distracting/missing, etc?

• The tables - when they move it doesn't seem very realistic.
• Lighting in the drama room could have been more controlled - Jonathan appears blurry/grainy.

List 2 things which you feel would have improved this sequence?

• Controlled lighting
• Better use of table shaking shot- make it seem more realistic.